tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post112403344356522526..comments2024-03-28T05:12:10.477-07:00Comments on Gone Gaming: Encounter 2/9Coldfoothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11636345146138362966noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post-1124455462940440832005-08-19T05:44:00.000-07:002005-08-19T05:44:00.000-07:00Ambitious. William Faulkner meets Philip K. Dick.Ambitious. William Faulkner meets Philip K. Dick.Joe Golahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07660986477477676629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post-1124447348630171112005-08-19T03:29:00.000-07:002005-08-19T03:29:00.000-07:00Colorized link of first chapter:http://jergames.bl...Colorized link of first chapter:<BR/><BR/>http://jergames.blogspot.com/2005/08/<BR/>encounter-19-colorized-version.htmlYehuda Berlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16038826060312027387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post-1124446135605806352005-08-19T03:08:00.000-07:002005-08-19T03:08:00.000-07:00Part of the idea behind this is that even Sarah do...Part of the idea behind this is that even Sarah doesn't always know whom is speaking. Colorizing the conversations would ruin this dichotomy, as josh indicated.<BR/><BR/>Nevertheless, I'll make a color version and provide a link.<BR/><BR/>I of course know who said what, so it is harder for me to grasp just how difficult it is for others. I would like to think that the personality behind the statements makes the attribution to each Sarah clear enough, but I could be wrong.<BR/><BR/>Unfortunately, my editor (wife) was on vacation for a month and only returned last night.<BR/><BR/>YehudaYehuda Berlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16038826060312027387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post-1124311210204382972005-08-17T13:40:00.000-07:002005-08-17T13:40:00.000-07:00Can't please everyone.Actually, the narrative with...Can't please everyone.<BR/><BR/>Actually, the narrative without color is similar to the opening to Stand on Zanzibar by John Brunner.<BR/><BR/>YehudaYehuda Berlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16038826060312027387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post-1124301348481379962005-08-17T10:55:00.000-07:002005-08-17T10:55:00.000-07:00The addition of color for each Sarah is a great he...The addition of color for each Sarah is a great help. And I still think the concept is unique and interesting.Coldfoothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11636345146138362966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14856978.post-1124269985807761062005-08-17T02:13:00.000-07:002005-08-17T02:13:00.000-07:00Sorry Yehuda, I can see it's beautifully written, ...Sorry Yehuda, I can see it's beautifully written, but I just can't follow it. You need to simplify the interleaving structure a bit, much bigger blocks with enough cues in each block to let us know which thread we're reading.Peterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10825350227973550098noreply@blogger.com